大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习7

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　　Whenever you see an old film, even one made as little as ten years before, you can’t help being strucked by the __1__appearance of the women taking part. Their hair styles and make-up look date; their skirts look either too long or too __2__short; their general appearance is, in fact, slightly ludicrous.
. y  G- b; P+ g1 t1 n　　The men taking part, on other hand, are clearly recognizable. __3__There is nothing about their appearance to suggest that they belong to an entire different age. This illusion is created __4__by changing fashions. Over the years, the great minority of men __5__have successfully resisted all attempts to make it change their __6__style of dress. The same cannot be said for women. Each year,a fewer so-called top designers in Paris and London lay down __7__on the law and women around the world run to obey. The __8__decrees of the designers are unpredictable and dictatorial.Sometime they decide arbitrarily, that skirts will be short and __9__waists will be height; hips are in and buttons are out. __10__
' ~& f4 U+ M6 j" q" l* ?# Z! ]　　答案：
　　1 strucked改为struck或者stricken。过去分词形式有误。strike的过去式是struck，过去分词为struck或者stricken。
　　2 date改为dated或者outdated，
　　3 on other hand 改为 on the other hand
　　4 entire改为entirely，副词修饰形容词different，并与different一起修饰age。
5 G' R$ ]6 G) ^* E2 \4 t5 G　　5 minority改为majority。　从上下文以及常识判断，多半男性成功地抵制了改变他们服装款式的企图，即多年来，男性大服装款式跟女性服饰相比没有多大的变化。
- L( I  b8 B, y4 n# P　　6 it改为them，them指代the great majority of men。
' h7 ]4 B- j. q　　7 fewer改为few，此处没有比较的意味。
; y8 d2 y: `0 u' D" p9 m　　8去掉on。lay down为习语，表示“规定(规则，原则，法规等)”。
　　9 sometime改为 sometimes。
6 e- H9 L9 z( L8 _/ i  C% M7 D　　10 height改为high。形容词作be 的表语。