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　　The grammatical words which play so large a part in English grammar are for the most part sharply and obviously different from the lexical words. A rough
　　and ready difference which may seem the most obvious is that grammatical __1__ words have “less meaning”, but in fact some grammarians have called them __2__ “empty” words as opposed in the “full” words of vocabulary. But this is a rather __3__ misled way of expressing the distinction. Although a word like the is not the name __4__ of something as man is, it is very far away from being meaningless; there is a __5__ sharp difference in meaning between “man is vile” and “the man is vile”, yet the　is the single vehicle of this difference in meaning. Moreover, grammatical words __6__ differ considerably among themselves as the amount of meaning they have even in __7__ the lexical sense. Another name for the grammatical words has been “little words.”
　　But size is by no mean a good criterion for distinguishing the grammatical words.” __8__ of English, when we consider that we have lexical words as go, man, say, car. __9__ Apart from this, however, there is a good deal of truth in what some people say:
　　we certainly do create a great number of obscurity when we omit them. This is __10__ illustrated not only in the poetry of Robert Browning but in the prose of telegrams　and newspaper headlines.
　　答案：
　　1 删掉the　此处的most并不表示obvious的最高级，而是用作副词修饰obvious，表示程度很高，因此前面不能加the。
　　2 将but改为and　　根据文章的意思，这里要用并列关系的and。
6 o4 Y- x, g' z* t* t  x9 g# c. |4 `　　3 将in改为to。　　as apposed to 是固定搭配，意思是“与……相比”。
　　4 将misled改为misleading
0 b6 j* s3 V" m  U) f4 h2 p　　5删掉away。　此处考查固定用法。 far from being...意思为“远非”“远远不怎么样”，符合这里的意思。而far away from 表示离某处很远。
! [  K) ~8 O  ?$ M2 E- v　　6 将single改为only或者sole。这里要表达“唯一的”。
6 i* X! L+ y: |$ {2 B$ _9 {　　7 在as后面加to或者将as 改为in。联系上下文，此处的意思是“grammatical words 本身在某某方面也有相当的差异，”as to 有“关于”或者“在某某方面的意思”；将as改为in，用differ from something in…也可表达这个意思。
　　8 将mean改为means　　9 将as改为like，或者在as前面加such
　　10 将number改为deal或者amount。obscurity是不可数名词，不能用a number of 来修饰。