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　　What is corporate culture? At its most basic, it’s described like __1__ the personality of an organization, or simply as “how things are　done around here.” It guides what employees think, act, and feel. __2__ Corporate culture is a wide term used to define the unique personality __3__ or character of a particular company or organization, and include __4__ such elements as core values and beliefs, corporate ethics, and rules of behavior. Corporate culture can be expressed in the company’s　mission statement and other communications, in the architectural　style or interior decoration, by what people wear to work, by　how people address to each other, and in the titles given to various __5__ employees. How do you uncover the corporate culture of a potential　employer? The truth is that you will never really know the corporate　culture after you have worked at the company for a number of months, __6__ but you can get close to it through research and observation. Understanding culture is a two-step process, starting with the research before __7__ the interview and ending with observation at the interview. The bottom line is that you are going to spend a lot of time on the work environment- __8__ and to be happy, successful, and productive, you will want to be ina place where you fit for the culture, a place where you can have __9__ voice, be respected, and have opportunities for growth. __10__
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7 D4 b7 o5 v( e+ |　　1.like改为as。as 作为连词可以用在形容词前，和动词regard或describe搭配，表示“看作，描述成”。　　2.what改为how。这里要表达的是“怎样想”，而不是“想什么”，联系前一句“how things are done around here”也可以帮助发现错误。
+ V4 J  {( |+ K0 z3 H& `　　3.wide改为broad。wide和broad容易错用。表示宽度时既可用broad，wide，wide更常用，如：a wide river；a broad river。但是表示具体的物件时只用wide，如 a wide bed，一般不说 a broad bed。 表示生理，概念或范围时，要用broad，如：a broad smile、broad shoulders、a broad meaning。
　　4.include 改为includes。include 的主语是主句主语 corporate culture，所以应该是第三人称的单数形式。
　　5.去掉to。address解释为“对某人说话”时是及物动词，无需加介词。
4 t! p' q7 z( N1 B　　6.after改为until。根据上下文的逻辑，文章是说，只有当求职者真正在公司工作了几个月后，才能了解它的文化。
, z( f* J# @! }7 T　　7.去掉the。前文没有提及，这里research是类指，而非特指。
　　8.on改为in。这里的介词并不是和动词spend搭配，而是和名词词组work environment一起作状语。
2 G: }. u9 d# c$ Q6 v　　9.去掉for。fit作为动词时，如果是及物动词，可以说fit something/somewhere。如果作为形容词，可以说 be fit for something，但是没有fit for 的用法。
3 X; I" ~3 A6 x* F- T1 P( A　　10.voice前面a。have a voice in something 的意思是“有权利对某事发表看法”。这个词组中的不定冠词不能省略。