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　　Aimlessness has hardly been typical of the postwar Japan whose　productivity and social harmony are the envy of the United States and Europe.But increasingly the Japanese is seeing a decline of their __1__ traditional work-moral values. Ten years ago young people were hardworking and saw their jobs as their primary reason for being,but now Japan has large fulfilled its economic needs, and young people __2__ don't know where they should go next.The coming of the age of the postwar baby boom and an entry __3__ of women into the male-dominated job market has limited the opportunities __4__ of teen-agers who are already questioning the heavy personalsacrifices involved climbing Japan's rigid social ladder to good __5__ schools and jobs. In a recent survey, it was found that only 24.5percent Japanese students were fully satisfied with school life,compared __6__ with 67.2 percent of students in the United States. In addition, far more Japanese workers expressed dissatisfaction with their jobs than did their counterparts in the 10 countries surveyed. __7__ While often praised by foreigners for its emphasis on the basics.
　　Japanese education tends to stress test taking and mechanic learning __8__ over creativity and self-expression. Last year Japan experienced 2,125incidents of school violence, including 929 assaults on teachers.
　　Amid the outcry, many conservative leaders are seeking a return to the prewar emphasis on moral education. Last year Mitsuo Detoyama,who was then education minister, raised his eyebrow when he argued __9__ that liberal reforms introduced by the American occupation authorities after World War II had weakened the "Japanese morality of respect of parents." __10__
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$ a; i2 }: H+ Z/ @- O　　1.is--are.the加上形容词一类人的时候后面应用动词的复数形式，如：The old receive particular respect in Chinese society.
　　2.large-largely.这里large是修饰fullfilled的，所以应改为largely，表示“大部分地”，如：The fundis largely financed through government borrowing.
　　3.the（age）--/.动词词组come of age表示“已成年”，中间不用任何冠词，所以它一旦变为-ing形式仍然保持原样。另外要避免将原句误读成The coming of ,the age of the postwar baby boom,这样断句意思解释不通。考试.大
2 f; i" L' r# C, ]5 x: k　　4.has--have.有两个原因限制了青少年进好的学校找到好的工作，这两个原因由and连接作并列主语，所以谓语动词应该用复数。
; q4 Y# M  n! n: ]% N3 A　　5.involved^--in.involved后面少了in，表示“关于，涉及到”，如All the children were involved in the school play.
1 M( I% t+ ?* V+ J: u; {. B& n, \5 D　　6.^Japanese--of.当percent做名词时，它后面应加上介词of，如：The report states that 42 percent of the alunmi contributed to the endowment.　当percent作形容词或者副词时，则不加of。如：There has been a ten percent increase in the number of new students arriving at polytechnic this year
　　7.^countries--other.从上句话中可知道Japan也参与了这次普查，因此在这句话里的比较结构中Japan应和其他10个同意参加普查的国家进行比较，所以应注明是10 other countries。考试.大
　　8.mechanic--mechanical.mechanic是名词，表示“制造工，技工”，所以这里应把它改为mechanical表示“机械的”。
　　9.eyebrow--eyebrows.toraise one's eyebrow 表示“（某事）引起（某人）的惊讶或不赞同”，如：He raised his eyebrows over some of the suggestions.
　　10.of--for.respect 后面通常跟for接人，表示“对（某人）的尊重”，如：respect for the old。