大学专业八级的改错练习80

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　　Before 1973, abortion was illegal in America unless the woman's　health was threatened. In March of 1970, Jane Roe, a single woman, instituted this federal action against the District Attorney of the country. The original idea was that women who　truly did not want a baby should not have to have it. __1__ Since pregnacy may be a blessed act when planned or wanted, __2__ forced pregnacy, like any force bodily invasion, is anathema to　American values and traditions. As legalized abortion has become an everyday part of American life, a different side to it has　emerged out. __3__ Where women once were aborting because they did not want a　child, the reasons being given now were becoming very different. __4__ Abortion has turned into something that women are being coerced　from boyfriends'/husbands' unwilling to be fathers, out of fear __5__ of the financial pressure, out of the panic from losing their jobs, out of panic from having to quit the school, or becoming __6__ homeless, or out of fear of their parents kicking them out into the street.Abrotion for these reasons can lead to problems which develop　when a woman is unable to get round her emotional responses __7__ from the trauma of an abortion. There are women who abort and do so completely of her own free will. These women have no __8__ regrets, no remorse, but are happy they had this choice availble. __9__ But a growing number of women are speaking up about how abortion　effected them adversely. __10__
　　答案：1.it--one。it和one用来指代时，it通常用于特指，one通常用于类指。结合上下文，此处应当指代前文的a baby，是类指，所以应当用one。
0 K6 d( V' J3 }3 ^, X　　2.Since--While。这里考的是根据上下文的逻辑关系判断连接词的使用。前后两个分句是对比pregnancy和forced pregnancy这两个方面，所以应该选用表示对比的连用词while。
! o4 m. i* W, X: S" ~' I( W/ @. Q$ u　　3.out--/。emerge一词后面不要受到中文的影响加上out；但是可以说come out。emerge可以和介词from搭配，表示“从……中浮现出来”。
　　4.were--are。虽然这一句从句中是过去时态，但是主句中谈的是“现在”的情况，所以应当用现在时态。
　　5.^from--into。动词coerce要和介词into搭配。coerce somebody into something，意思是“胁迫某人做某事”。
　　6.the--/。school 前带定冠词时通常是特指，不带冠词通常是类指。这里说“辍学”，应当是类指，所以不能带定冠词。
8 ]9 a# v2 w- d3 Q% u" n　　7.round--through。get through 的意思是“度过（经济，感情等的）难关”，get round有“说服”的意思，原文是说“客服流畅造成的情感创伤”，应当用get through。
　　8.her--their。这里的代词是指前文提到的women，所以应该是复数。
　　9.but (are)--and。从逻辑关系来看，这一句“很高兴有这个选择”和前文“没有遗憾、不后悔”是一致的、并列的，所以不能用转折连词。
　　10.effected--affected。effect和affect两个词形近，而词性不同，容易混淆。前者通常作为名词，后者是动词。