专八模拟考题辅导：改错篇4

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’Home， sweet home" is a phrase that express an essential attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the family house is sweet or no sweet， the cherished ideal of home _____1
; w+ N; R* @  \% |) ohas great importance for many people.
) Y: H- k) J7 a. m0 S5 E0 ~This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream， dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers of American West， was to find a piece of place， build a house _____2
1 f$ n) }( g7 X- O5 Jfor one’s family， and started a farm. These small households were _____3
7 g0 g/ [/ k; K; lportraits of independence: the entire family- mother， father， children，even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to ___4
support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5
9 k( N9 d' R1 |5 k+ oof family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the United States no longer live on farms， but the ideal of home ownership _____6
is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.
% F6 ~* F  G8 k8 a6 o" wWhen U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ， for example， _____7
) j8 V6 ?. Q  A4 [+ z5 w* F1 Mthey dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8
+ J) t: [3 M( I1 ?# N! Ea tremendous boom in home building. The new houses， typically in the suburbs， were often small and more or less identical， but it satisfied _____9
a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their way of life._____10
1. 将 no 改为 not
2. 将 place 改为 land
place是可数名词，作“地方”讲，而land意为“土地，田地”是不可数名词。例如:
7 e& n. X, W+ ]$ Q' k$ c) ^) iSolitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.
当你偶尔光顾时，独处是一个美妙的境地，但是如果久留，它却是一个糟糕的地方。
+ H4 |' H  W7 SThere is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.
3. 将 started 改为 start
start应使用不定式，以和前面的find， build一致。
4. 将 working 改为 work
$ n/ g! M9 X) p( H; [work应该用第三人称复数，和live一致。另外，family在这里作“家人”讲，是复数。
& }& P0 g8 Z* D% z* n+ }5 将 anyone 改为 everyone
8 Y; w2 D4 K3 A. j" N0 u这里是要用everyone 指每个人，而不是要用anyone泛指。
+ v1 W4 V1 x) i: z1 u6. 将 but 删除
5 f" I6 _6 p% U% h( l, i7. 将 before 改为 after
; j2 t3 @2 C9 [# k! P' V3 }根据上下文判断，这里要表达的是二战之后。
8. 将 But 改为 And
2 Q; V2 m) s/ j/ ]- _根据语意，这里要表达的是递进关系，而不是转折关系。例如：
When I do good， I feel good. When I do bad， I feel bad. And that’s my religion.
当我行善事，我感到坦然;当我行恶时，我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。
. R8 _$ b! w9 r& R$ @0 E9 将 it 改为 they
10 在house the中间加入介词 as regard...as 作“把……当作……”讲。