“Home, sweet home” is a phrase that express an essential attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the family house is sweet or no sweet, the cherished ideal of home _____1_____has great importance for many people.
* R% M& `& N% u# r This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream, dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers of American West, was to find a piece of place, build a house _____2_____for one’s family, and started a farm. These small households were _____3_____portraits of independence: the entire family- mother, father, children,even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to ___4_____support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5_____of family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the United States no longer live on farms, but the ideal of home ownership _____6_____is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.
9 M0 O- X' _' {3 R% p! N When U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ, for example, _____7_____they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8_____a tremendous boom in home building. The new houses, typically in the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied _____9_____a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their _____10_____way of life.
5 x' {; g: K+ D/ N+ _ 答案:1 将no改为 not
5 D, U" L+ Y" O2 D 2 将place改为land2 e4 w5 ^( {1 N$ ^
place是可数名词,作“地方”讲,而land意为“土地,田地”是不可数名词。例如:# O+ }$ E, }1 I Y# m* i! K2 U
Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.$ {2 J. I& i Z! Z( X
当你偶尔光顾时,独处是一个美妙的境地,但是如果久留,它却是一个糟糕的地方。
0 E1 E* G, ~1 M5 q9 @ There is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.
& b# L/ {# r5 t& N! n: z 3 将started改为start1 C7 R- j4 a+ g' ~; ?
start应使用不定式,以和前面的find,build一致。3 S# U" ]0 R4 ~! w/ {4 l3 N4 E
4 将working改为work。
% J$ i9 e6 a+ R work应该用第三人称复数,和live一致。另外,family在这里作“家人”讲,是复数。
* I7 D4 a+ a8 j9 u7 J 5 将anyone改为everyone4 W, C) |$ _8 y3 g# ]) t1 v7 w$ v0 ?
这里是要用everyone指每个人,而不是要用anyone泛指。
0 i K5 J! h) n. G& e8 x" q 6 将but删除
3 s8 ^6 ~4 m1 ^' i' H: E' [6 N 7将before改为after1 o7 g9 T: W, x' _- y
根据上下文判断,这里要表达的是二战之后。& T$ a9 i( o& T" t6 q
8 将But改为 And1 p1 l1 `# }9 K2 i0 d5 D+ s v9 U$ T! l- F
根据语意,这里要表达的是递进关系,而不是转折关系。例如:( c+ y6 `1 n2 I8 K8 I5 ~4 P
When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. And that’s my religion.
/ Y- M3 N }; x 当我行善事,我感到坦然;当我行恶时,我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。
6 [$ @( U1 y1 S# |6 U 9 将it改为they
) l& D" \! A8 k 10 在house the中间加入介词as
! h2 |8 a& |( G" k! V) ? regard…as 作“把……当作……”讲。 |