Classic Intention MovementIn social situations, the classic Intention Movement is “the chair-grasp”. Host and guest have been talking for some time, but now the host has an appointment to keep and can get away. His urge __1__to go is held in cheek by his desire not be rude to his guest. If he did __2__not care of his guest’s feelings he would simply get up out of his chair __3__and to announce his departure. This is what his body wants to do, __4__therefore his politeness glues his body to the chair and refuses to let him __5__raise. It is at this point that he performs the chair-grasp Intention __6__Movement. He continues to talk to the guest and listen to him, but leansforward and grasps the arms of the chair as about to push himself upwards. __7__This is the first act he would make if he were rising. If he were not __8__hesitating, it would only last the fraction of the second. He would lean, __9__push, rise, and be up. But now, instead, it lasts much longer. He holds his “readiness-to-rise” post and keeps on holding it. It is as if his __10__body had frozen at the get-ready moment.1 l& x5 I" s- B' N! ^
答案及解析:
, S4 b) b2 H0 A" J, T# l1. 将can改为must根据上下文的意思“主人有一个约会,必须离开”是客观要求,而不是“能不能”或者“可不可以”的问题。1 Q6 y9 `) Z* g1 j4 Q, y
2. not后面加todesire 后应该加动词不定式to do something。1 ^ m( M( [- t/ U4 A" Z
3. 将of 改为aboutcare about意思为“对…在意,在乎”,而care of 意思为“转交”( T( c/ Y* \. i* R+ [& z
(觉得还可以直接去掉 of,care 本身也有在乎的意思,可是答案不这么写,你怎么看嘞?)4. 删掉and或者to。
' p9 u2 }; N9 c3 C& j5. 将therefore 改为 yet或but这两部分之间应是转折的关系。
0 ^. U/ Y' N% e8 T+ |9 E6. 将raise改为riseraise 是及物动词,后面必须加宾语,而且在此与文章意思不符。rise意为“起身”,“站起来”,符合文义。
2 o6 t" W' Z( Z ?+ ~7. 在as 和 about之间加上if或者though此处的意思是主人身子往前倾,双手抓着椅子,好像就要站起来一样。as if/ though to do something 意思为“仿佛要做什么事情”。1 N( r! H7 K) U/ y- |. u, ?! b( R
8. 将make改为perform或do此处考查搭配问题,动词make与前面的act不能搭配。8 k; H* n, `; W- }
9.将the改为aa fraction of a second 意思为非常短暂的时间。/ S9 Y; h) b& H3 s! k0 `
10. 将post改为posture |