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Besides
1 ]% A0 h/ K/ ~- Q* i Finally三句话使用不同主语，一个是公司一个是顾客一个是原因做主语; J4 j9 a& N+ s& u
4) Conclusion
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/ |2 B" H! b0 e) S. y3 k& i I recommend choosing T because of the reliability.
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At the moment all customers are not satisfied but many measures have been taken to improve their satisfaction
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We are sure to get reply soon after we launch the recruitment campaign.
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More staff do not only means more cost, it also means satisfied customers.& s! K1 ?' t* z, P# W' }( W7 ^
We need to recruit 35 new staff, including electrical engineer, software engineer, network engineer and product developers. All they should have at least 2 years’ experience in relevant field. |
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