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8 L( K% X! U6 I' s/ C' X/ H: \ From: Office manager
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) R7 [" h% \0 J2 Y Date: September 20, 2008
6 }+ j5 O9 b! q& M: E) e" A Our company has merged with Mason. co recently. [1]The new name " MasonGolding" will take effect on October 1st. Please use the new name in your daily affairs[2] from then on. Thanks for your cooperation.
; f, ~! J, W# n4 v8 G4 g2 j [1]开头这句改为分词,following the merger, ....
2 r& G/ d% y$ F* p: v [2]改为:routine work 或者其他可以表示日常工作的,affairs 一般是指报纸的一周大事记,或者个人事,比如:love affairs 就是桃色事件,第三者插足。2 W* O) ?: c; B& Z1 A1 T) M4 n
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' J% M! ~+ c; |( d3 H From:Sonia5 J& K2 t* \8 {5 a3 r' H( O
To:All staff1 `- T: [3 w3 e; z' H& L
Date:29 september 2008
. Z3 e. G, j! f* W' t9 C6 b Re:The changed[1] name of our company
! Y- h2 a% s% V$ Z5 M% u9 n As our company has merged with one of our competiter,[2]the name of our company has changed[3] into MasonGolding. All the staff should use our new name since 1 October, and we can only use the new name after that day
, s1 ^$ ^" C/ C3 q4 n, [3 s1 S* u If you have any question, please connect us. [4]" B/ ]2 H' V& }$ [( S2 o4 M
Thank you!# e& E4 w/ @* V9 o+ M
[1]过去分词作定语或状语都是表示已经结束的动作,如果名字已经改完,就不用有这封memo 了。/ t( L9 ^" f# p# L) ~& e
[2]改为介词短语after the merger,
( `$ T# p! m! e, n [3]时态错误,完成时表示已经了,应该是将来时。
1 D6 q$ G# k( C% Z- Y# I' l [4]去掉,名字问题毋庸置疑,没有商量。
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As the director board agreed to move toward a merger between our company and Mason, [1] the name of company will be changed. The new name MasonGolding become effective from next month[2].Please be noticed. I# h4 _) k% V4 i" C* d. T
[1]好罗嗦的原因啊,董事会的决定你就不用提了。
( I0 a* t0 k6 A# i2 W# L [2]太长的时间,也太不具体。 |