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Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers. Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.3 K/ m; R' \$ `
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我们需要确定,如果我是公司职员,我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道:! f. T4 r( m3 e# N8 ~+ [ Z) Y
1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开始;$ }; a5 `' R2 V2 V6 j& }: i
2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?9 E2 ]8 @2 W6 k. s# `+ N+ o0 N
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TO: All Employees8 ^( J+ O% K0 ]9 E$ H" R+ v
FROM: CEO, Willan Smith
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For all the employees, especially smokers,[1] plz be aware that our company's new smoking policy has been formulated as follow: A main smoking area's going to be restricted before Next MONDAY[2], anyone is not allowed to smoker in non-smoking zone even in the washing room.[3]Plz target the smoking and non-moking area and stick to the company's new policy.[4]Thx.
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A6 d$ d9 p" j [1]去掉,抬头已经写过给所有的员工,所以直接从正文开始就行了,费这个事干什么?! \ |, x) v/ r! F/ H
[2]时间不确切,最好是 from next Monday. Before 这个期限是什么时候?如果不能给出确切信息,就不要说,还不如换成具体的吸烟区域更好: be restricted to the room next to the toilet.) ^( o: m& i/ B3 y% k
[3]你经常在洗手间吸烟吗?或者你们公司有这样的同事?把这句话去掉。1 i# p9 l* Q" y! C# Z
[4]添加:to ensure that it is fair to all of you.
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To: All staff
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Everybody know that smoking is dangerous for your health. And the The studies didn't just point to the ill effects of smoking on those who smoke--non-smokers, too. [1] Notice is hereby given that the smoking area is located in the special corner[2] of the first floor of this building. This come into force on[3] September 15th.Thanks.7 p% P5 D& Q( n9 M% V! Y
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[1]Memo 的主要作用就是提醒同事们注意事项,这和吸烟有多有害不相干,去掉。改为:to assure working environment
' H; f. \+ V; V& _" Z [2]一般的公司都应该给个room4 u! \; k y: y ? N% I/ E; o- X
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