(三)遥远指代 When people about to purchase goods, advertisements sway their choices, which might be misleading.
$ q/ N- Z) A- N _ 此处which所指代的应该是名词advertisements,此时必须紧随其后,而不能进行间隔指代,简单说来,关系代词要紧接在所指成分之后。 q3 J' ~, O8 ^
以上所讨论的是句间的遥远指代,遥远指代的偏误还可能存在于段落之间。例如在一段开头就直接出现了it is…,用这个it指代上一个段落出现的某个词或者句子,这样的错误在学生的作文当中也经常出现。
1 R6 M' T R4 A2 x (四)名词反复
8 {$ A; t7 C' ~ Traditional foodsare very important. Traditionalfoods are symbols of nations and cultures.9 m: l8 n ]6 I2 j( Z% ~
其实此处第二次出现的traditional foods可以用they来替代。不停重现名词其实是一种无能力运用代词的体现,这样的说话风格很像老奶奶的裹脚布,又臭又长,颇有《大话西游》中唐僧的味道。中 华 考 试 网
+ E! \$ m: s- p; t; A/ H/ g8 ^ 现在再回头去看我们刚开始接触到的两个错误的例句,便一目了然了:( P: D% |+ v+ c- t7 ]
Medical care and education are cornerstones of the society, because it is needed by both youngsters and adults.
1 Z0 Z, F. \. H4 [- { 代词“数”的不一致,应该把it改为they,相应的,后面的is也应该改为are.2 B& ?! h; n: B2 u! D& b2 ~# X7 m
Doctors are not able to control themselves'profitable activities.& \3 ?' M" u* P! V; B1 ^3 `
反身代词运用错误,应该把themselves改为their own. |