写作是雅思考试的一大难点,如何将一个句子用完美的语言表达出来就更是一个难题了,郑州国际工商专修学院的张老师对于语句的修饰方面给大家五个小窍门: 一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。0 \# G7 r. S, v7 g
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:. h h% H6 P4 a" d( a4 @$ c
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)/ J3 [2 y( _ d) x
Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2 N' n. ^( U. J& v. l1 H# g 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
, L3 _0 t$ G( f0 r: G 1)Weak: The team members are good players.
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- }# g, p: c O7 j% l1 e. c9 d/ k Revision: The team members play well.1 2尾页 |