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[雅思写作] 雅思写作高分范文之Studying Abroad

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发表于 2012-8-14 21:56:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
下面是一篇关于留学海外的雅思写作高分范文,这篇雅思写作范文的主要内容是对比分析了留学海外的好处和坏处.下面是详细内容,供大家参考,希望给大家的写作备考带来一些帮助。   You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.: N! w% Q: q0 H9 u9 e( C: b
  You should write at least 250 words.
$ ?! G4 U4 \3 F& A# p4 y  You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.* T* [2 \) S& Z2 u$ V: C
  Studying Abroad
) Q" e0 y9 ?2 ^% M4 `  Attending school abroad has many advantages.* M8 r( o2 n. ]9 {: i
  In the first place, by looking at our own country from the outside, we can best see the strong points of our nation, and therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds.
- y! C2 {4 c* ]9 r9 w: T  Secondly, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people.
/ A9 Z; Z0 f+ G8 S* ^/ b) V  Thirdly, we use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly. But the most important thing in attending a foreign university is to get acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and technology and make use of the first-rate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile to go abroad for further studies.7 x  ]# }+ |9 a3 S3 l7 I; D4 r4 |+ W
  However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign university.9 G8 U! |8 H2 p! y9 j9 C2 B
  The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most of the students who are ready to go abroad do not have adequate proficiency in the language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult to understand what the instructors are saying. Besides, for lack of knowledge of the customs and way of life of the local people, they may constantly run into trouble in dealing with various situations.1 v, h; |, k6 R2 e3 `* A2 _
  Therefore, misunderstandings often arise. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our own country, so most students have to find part-time jobs in order to help support themselves. Faced with these difficulties, many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and some students may even fail in their courses and learn little, even some have to return to their motherland.4 I8 q" y" r. y9 Y' ?
  Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole, it is a good thing to go and study abroad particularly when the subject is very weak or not available in our own country. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages. (348 words).
" b! G) j4 Q+ X, K+ K0 `8 @7 q, L/ U% K  以上就是这篇雅思写作高分范文的全部内容,这篇雅思写作范文并不完整,缺少正式的开头结尾和相关的段落连接词。大家可以在自己的雅思写作备考中进行适当的修改和练习。
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