雅思大作文注意事项雅思一直是中国考生比较头疼的部分,如何突破雅思写作高分?2012年雅思写作该注意些什么?何钢老师给考生们分享:雅思大作文注意事项。 - Q: r. p# S/ }- B5 f9 Y+ I
一、雅思大作文开头:# N0 ~0 b9 g+ c1 d
开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。4 H A- M' b w+ o) R
如:Should the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?3 l+ c5 Z/ ]3 P, }& C5 `# ]( B
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not。
) X5 T6 S9 i6 n. ~ Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society。
# N# x9 O8 P0 I1 h: }/ L n* g$ ` As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons。! I" L2 V h. l: l. r2 @/ G2 l* b
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures。
9 Z+ V5 C! {8 i1 E- V) c0 M 二、雅思大作文结构:/ l, _% w" S* q
一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡$ r% \5 l" w, m1 ~( h! h
三、雅思大作文语言:9 U9 { n; T5 @6 W8 H
避免idioms, famous sayings7 [" P' t' M4 V F9 J
避免poetic language6 x% G$ S, C5 p0 W' W
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way- s: b( u% }3 K4 w3 j3 u1 ~
Use “a mix of longer and short sentences” |