</p> 9、累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:
j, i$ m6 { i4 b+ j) U In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him。
9 }' y! g* n m, T 本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”; _, f) J7 c/ p( P9 @. b
可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him。" \" L5 ^7 `2 b7 x- V
例1. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need。
1 L( B3 F4 t; S. f( m 剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
7 e8 n0 Y) v# H: g X5 S 改为:
/ C6 U: W3 U/ W Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need。: ?0 T3 o: k3 z0 w. [& Y# h4 Z
10、 不连贯(Incoherence)不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
, E% c4 \) d9 W* P7 ^; \ 例1. The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth。
) V9 t2 u% V! ]- i, Y; {. R7 W 剖析:The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。( s% r5 G/ l, x
改为:
- U0 g& J3 o* a# p8 Y Fresh water is the most important thing in the world。
9 a' v! Z5 J% B3 M 11、 综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。
, n! b1 F: m$ V% v8 c 例1.Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our‘s eat, cloth, live, go etc。 |