托福写作范文：改善公共交通工具

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　　Improving Public Transportation
+ I. F' |, k2 n9 U　　「题目」Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways， or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation （buses， trains， subways）？ Why？ Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
　　「范文」
0 k( a% F6 W9 s　　Good transportation is very important to the success of both individuals and a city. Without efficient means of transportation， people will waste a great deal of time going to and from work. This will make them tired and less productive in their jobs. People may rely on either private or public transportation to get them to and from work. If a choice has to be made between spending money on improving the roads for private vehicles or improving public transportation， I would choose the latter for the following reasons.
　　First of all， better public transportation systems， including buses， trains and subways， will encourage more people to use them rather than drive their own cars. This will reduce the total amount of traffic on the roads and make travel quicker for everyone. Second， using public transportation saves energy. A bus which carries 60 people is a far more efficient use of fuel than 60 individual cars driving the same route. And last but not least， greater use of public transportation causes less pollution and will keep the environment cleaner. There are many reasons to support spending money on public transportation. Good transportation systems make a city cleaner， more efficient and more convenient. This improves everyone's quality of life and can make the city more prosperous. Therefore， I support spending money on public transportation systems rather than improving roads.
　　「注释」
7 u! T. l: S4 Q4 F2 `　　transportation n.运输工具
　　individual n.个人
& e! e( Y8 U0 Q3 T" W* `& N　　means n.方法；工具
　　productive adj.有生产力的
　　rely on依赖（=depend on）
6 O7 ?1 T4 b& s- G2 u　　private adj.私人的
4 U+ F' Z9 t' w1 a　　the latter （两者中）后者（←→the former）
; }2 |+ D' D; N+ M9 S0 k  U+ |' w　　energy n.能源
' W% [' J8 S# e+ _; ]　　fuel n.燃料
2 ^. I4 g2 r+ F2 D( {6 o4 x0 L. ?1 s　　carry v.运送
　　route n.路线
　　last but not least最后一项要点是
0 d+ d3 K( u, n$ Y5 U4 O# }　　quality of life生活质量
　　prosperous adj.繁荣的