考生写作必备：常见病句分析（二）

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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
+ d9 P, u' B! k, p　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
$ b$ E5 B( l! {1 d8 R　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
9 O- ]$ w" D+ g5 J) S　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
: B% |( N) C) o' D0 P　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
& I8 J1 t# k+ z　　16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.
$ R0 q$ f* g& d$ O　　改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
; o2 b7 _3 M: x6 u% G1 a　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
+ [4 U* t: S+ x/ u8 `　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
! H- P% y. o6 o% w/ U" E1 }　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
0 Q2 H. C9 c1 `' U$ J　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
　　19. They cannot think clearly.
( s' ]6 O  E: D. [　　改进: They cannot think straight.
/ Z: e+ R/ s" Z5 _" Q　　20. Money can improve their living standard. 　　改进: Money can improve their life.