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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇一百一十八

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
There are both advantages and disadvantages of establishing a shopping mall in our neighborhood. I am worried about traffic and how it will affect our community. However, I believe it will benefit local business and increase appreciations for local area. All in all, I think it is a good idea.  
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' G4 s- I* k% U1 q. WFor those what I am worried about, traffic congestion and parking problem are obverse. First of  
) f+ W+ a9 X5 T9 \4 `all, traffic congestion is always a concern when building something new. Our streets are narrow,  
. {. M% P, P& r# D# d0 y9 N/ E  u  `with parking on both sides. A shopping center will certainly bring more traffic than ever before,  $ U3 R1 G2 u) t; K- G- u
and heavy traffic means big congestion. At the same time, parking is also a problem in this area.  ; q: c# c+ b' x3 e
There are few garages attached to houses. Most of residents depend on finding spaces on the  
5 R. L( B8 J7 W5 kstreet for parking. If a shopping mall is build, we must compete with customers and patrons for  " P* G, T* \1 `9 _; b. R
those parking spaces. Furthermore, if the shopping center offers valet parking service, it would be  
8 r( ?% b% L' I/ z* X, A& E" \even worse because valet parking works in terms to grab every possible spaces available in street.  " F  o4 e! Y% }$ e) @' N, Q+ B" M
  
2 ^- Y0 E. a- ?( R( j- E8 KOn the other hand, building up a shopping center will give this neighborhood more opportunities  
+ @# w# _8 M% d/ Nand benefits. Residents in this area could certainly take the job that shopping center offers. People  / ~5 X3 G2 S& W) O3 O, @
would earn more money and spend on other business, such as entertainment and education, which  4 O4 i  A& F# A, B
are operating in our neighborhood or adjacent communities. As a result, not only local business  
) X/ r6 f3 z* x, d* Q" r. Jbut also inter-community business boosts up and a prodigious amount of fortune will be  
8 z; s: P8 U8 G+ n' g( ]) i+ B4 maccumulated to our neighborhood. A shopping center can also attract people to visit our  3 Y$ D0 y: l1 m$ D+ V! o
community. When they drive to the shopping center, they will see what a nice place this area is to  
  f2 Y3 p. s" _8 d6 ~. q! ]/ hlive. Therefore, we would have an increasing number of residents in the next couple of years. It is  
, M% n* M% g, Z. R5 |1 overy important to introduce new numbers because we have lost many residents to suburbs during  
, k. q+ y" ?9 l' f- [& i( M  brecent years.  
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In a short, there are several details to consider when planning a shopping center. In my part, I support to have a new shopping center in my community because its advantages outweigh  3 G: X' h; w" B8 ^1 N
disadvantages.
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