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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇七十四

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Hesitating I enter my house, the light outside is dimming and the shadows make everything appear  
6 \& @) H* k1 D: Ounfamiliar. I know that my husband has not returned from work yet, simply because his car is not  
! F/ U" `" p1 vin the garage. I am alone. I carefully check all the rooms, almost expecting something to happen  
5 F0 n% d% _  b; x1 T* i# ]suddenly. I hold my bag in my hand as if it were a weapon. After the whole house has been  
: B' g( _  ^- [$ Ndeclared "clear," I start to breathe normally again and a smile appears on my face as I realize,  ' N0 V- C6 z9 a# Y( e. e
once again, how a simple movie seen at the cinema a week earlier can modify my actions.  
  n4 H$ e% @  V0 ?* [1 y. F8 {Sometimes I wonder if I should watch TV, with all its shows that make me wonder whether I  
4 L! k# Q( i: z0 Sexercise enough, whether I am slim enough, or whether I treat my pets with the care they deserve:  
4 G4 ?% b: A: `) Y4 L( I& O* ^$ ?am I really concerned about their mental health? Not to mention the hundreds of commercials that  3 q: p6 r# ]% A# j  s; t
try to make me believe I need a water purifier to remain alive since the water I am currently  & [. M( F) l/ ]8 B7 i
drinking is heavily polluted! And countless are the times when I have heard people talking by  
" Q. ^, f. h; Yquotations learned from movies. We need to watch shows and films to know what to say, how to  5 r8 {' r- Z& _% o8 ^* {3 j
be, how to act. We are so addicted to all this that it almost seems like we cannot think on our own.  
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I cannot help thinking about what happened to me some days ago, an example that clearly shows what kind of power TV has over people. My husband and I were in a restaurant when I heard my young neighbor pronouncing violent words in a low angry voice. Surprised, I turned to better understand the situation and I saw that he was holding a fake military device and was acting as if he were filming a war movie. I am sure that if I had been a little be more updated about this type of movie, I would have recognized what he was saying as a quotation. Now, I wonder if he uses such a language also with his friends and with his parents, if he is aggressive, and if so, whether his attitude has really nothing to do with what he watches on TV.  , N4 N- _1 E7 V7 f
  
6 C% H2 Z' \8 s) u) [" u* xThat same evening on the way home I saw two cars stopped one next to the other at a traffic light  
: o2 j( w3 N, b7 eand as soon as the light turned green they started racing, in the middle of town. In this case not
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:11 | 显示全部楼层

历年托福考生优秀范文155篇七十四

even a major knowledge of movies and TV programs would have helped me: there are just to  & y/ k0 o. ~6 v$ j/ R6 S# k2 F
many of them on the market showing the exact same thing: people racing with cars.  ' [6 R2 l0 u, C( h) p' r
  
1 b/ v. B1 V# _1 v5 BI am sure that everybody, if asked, could easily list many other examples of how TV and movies can modify our behavior and therefore our life but, I wonder, if we will always be able to draw the line between a TV show and real life, between what they make us think we want and what instead we really need and are and believe.
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