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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇八十一

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I fully agree with the claim that there is no correlation between success and luck. Moreover, I  
1 \' e. s/ }( p  D! o1 i; Punderstand success to refer to one’s ability to achieve the predominant part of his goals in his  
$ E& ^8 L5 x' ]' S% F! T* Olifetime, which in turn leads to a correlation between success and income since the  
# Q8 F2 L. d, N3 O- `accomplishment of such a natural goal as to provide a good future for your loved ones demands the means. What is the simplest and most lawful way to earn enough to consider yourself a  
+ P) m" b1 ]5 {successful person? To receive a good education and to find a good job. Both receiving an    M+ ?( P* J. @2 z; T( }" U" S
education and making a career presuppose one’s readiness to work hard, and success without hard work is simply not possible for the vast majority of the world’s population. The reasons and  ! F3 l6 v  P2 |( _
examples listed below will strengthen my point of view.  
5 D2 b8 \9 n7 H, F4 s- E1 YFirst of all, considering an education and a career as key factors of success, one will choose to  ) l) t+ I2 q, Z! R, T
pursue a degree from a college or a university. One wishing to be admitted to the university will  2 t( A9 i9 M! u! ?
have to take several tests. It is doubtful that someone will be so lucky that knowing nothing, he  & L  |3 D0 A* y) y5 l
could pass the test with a high score. A low score means failure, and that test taker will not likely  
1 X  E* A, N& |1 g* t3 ?be admitted. Therefore, in order to be successful, one should prepare for the tests and work hard,  
& |" b0 W( T+ N0 C' lbecause a good education will provide him with a good job and an opportunity to accomplish  5 E% C- i3 O5 ?) o! j* o( o
some of his goals and dreams. In my lifetime, I have never met a person who could graduate from a college without working hard.  , r6 w9 S! a" ?, q% r' H
Secondly, it is impossible to make a career if one is indolent and lacking knowledge, at least in  ' M- S6 c4 }3 Y
developed countries. Luck plays no role in achieving this success. Even if someone was  9 I& V/ J! P' m, O
unbelievably lucky enough to become a manager not being qualified enough, he will be asked to  5 t) t- t( d" k" |4 J2 V
resign in the near future because of his inability due to lack of knowledge and experience to make  6 J' c$ j9 O7 o& L2 B6 v, }
right decisions. For instance, I used to work for a very small company owned by a friend. This  
/ C4 S5 F4 _2 y. Q* k) ]# j$ ?; Lcompany was later closed because of bankruptcy. The cause of bankruptcy was wrong strategies  
% s, n1 K: ?% a& h# w  t0 o# Pand decisions made by the owner. After the failure, he went to a university and worked for  ) f1 N# M5 w+ X6 h/ E: `
another company so that he could obtain experience and become a successful businessman.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:11 | 显示全部楼层

历年托福考生优秀范文155篇八十一

Nowadays, he considers himself a successful person because he had turned into reality his two  
: u" _0 {4 v4 I: ~+ G4 |8 M/ ?biggest dreams of producing consumer goods of high quality and making charitable donations to  ) S& o  Y; j& w4 Z8 [/ j# Z
needy people.  " }- E5 o( T/ B' }
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In sum, as long as someone understands success as an ability to turn into reality some of his  5 L9 g. r$ i! D, w  x. z4 U; j- O
dreams and goals, he will have to work hard because he will need money. And his chances to earn  
; w- V! `+ h0 zthat money will remarkably increase if he could graduate from a college and make a career. All of  0 t. a# @* o4 K. g& U9 O3 @1 |" R- M
these things are simply not possible without hard work. Luck has no place in such a scheme of  
6 W# o- n; H. J4 Y$ n+ T3 L% e2 G( Eevents.
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