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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇七十

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
With the developement of my hometown in the past few years, the population is expanding very fast. The city is expiriencing not only a higher birthrate than ever, but also waves of immigration. The streets in the city are crowed or even jamed during the rush hours. If I could change one thing about my hometown, I would develope an advanced public traffic system.  7 c1 N" x, X- C& h
In order to hold such an exploding population, the city has extended miles by miles without much  $ @& H4 l$ v% r7 V0 d
plan. It is common for people to travel from the southmost part to the northmost part of the city to  ; A1 x+ m5 K+ a2 ^" C& `1 B
go to work everyday. They have to spend three hours or more on the way they go to work and  4 L: v: V  w; \1 i5 x( u6 w
come home. Eight hours’ work is a heavy burden, while people have to spend hours before and  + b4 ?+ o) ^  i2 x6 ~
after the work. A subway running through or around the city can solve the problem. People could  # N/ q8 b& {6 p4 m
live further away from the downtown without worrying about spending too much time on the way.  
" V' F+ r) `9 A/ ySome people buy their own car or take a taxi to work everyday. It’s really expensive for most of  
/ [  ~" d7 h# M  z; I7 N1 s0 hthe people in the city. They can’t afford paying so much on traffic fares. Many civil engineering  0 d7 T9 u0 X3 q* _' V' z/ }
experts advocate that sharing a public traffic system is the most efficient way. People could  & O9 f$ J' X5 F6 J, E
reduce their fares a lot by using the public traffic system, and they can spend the money on some  
% h. f: f2 G/ U# Z1 Fother things.  
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: ^. i; q; t' m# |4 [Even there are more and more people who can afford buying a car or taking taxi everyday, It is still suggested to using the public traffic system. Because the road developement can never keep up with the demand of the increasing cars, the cars may jam on the roads during rush hours.  
" |  G, j) c& p% \  _! kUsually, the speed of the car in that time is no higher than a bycicle! And pollution is another concern. So many private cars running in the city will bring us an environmental problem. On the other hand, the pollution from the public traffic system is much lighter.  $ w  h4 B3 z0 N3 n# r/ W
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All in all, an advanced public traffic system time efficient, cost efficient, and pollution preventing. This is the trend of advanced cities.
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