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[综合辅导] 托业作文常见错误23种

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发表于 2012-8-15 00:15:43 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  1.结构不平行 例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
& n' R& ~0 C8 l: M& Z) N! J& _! p  2.不知所云 例:Many companies began using computers mouth.' ^+ w! x: W0 _( _# M/ j( t
  3.段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
( F: e- n+ |8 T! f- ?4 w  4.句子别扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。) S; W( K  b0 F0 J/ w
  5.不要使用缩写 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t,don"t,it"s,we"ll,they"ve等等) ,而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
" l- V" B8 W% t7 B  d- M  6.关联词语重复 Since I want to go to a good school,therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
- w% J! X, F2 W1 P0 W5 Y! X2 o  7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子没有主要主语或主要动词,因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
5 g7 a/ @5 [: r, h! s: w+ U  u& j  8.不要使用get  When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式,意思也过于含糊,不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词,如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等。5 m8 S- l, T  A8 E! O9 F! w; U
  9.书写难以辨认,信息不正确 I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 传的信息不正确,或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的,应当解释为什么这样,因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见,应当使用many或most.非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 尽管看起来象个单词,其实不是,至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。% H8 ~$ [4 p. r% M/ X( i
  10.介词多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因而不能在它们前面添加介词。* X2 ~/ j$ m, {3 e9 d/ p7 `
  11.跑题或不相关 There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。
0 R; T3 ]; E" S! i1 q  12.陈词滥调 It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表达的意思很普通 大多数人都已经知道到了,因而就没有必要再说出来。
7 Z4 _9 G+ a6 K# L- D  13.标点问题 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号,尤其是当他们用手写的时候。- G# S& b; B7 V- B. G% ?
  14.重复冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一种意思的表述不止一次,或者某个词语不必要。) {0 ]( i6 o" `) X3 L
  15.单数/复数 Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 单词需要从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。 单数可数名词 单数可数名词不能单独使用,应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary"s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。: D0 k/ ~, o- q8 N8 `
  16.拼写错误,主语、动词或宾语有问题 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本结构有问题, 缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。1 \/ N& Y$ x) d* M5 g
  17.语气与文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 语气与文章其他部分不相符, 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
( M' M4 p8 }7 o& p. ~# W- M8 r; X3 X  18.代词指代不明 If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. 代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。
, c/ w: G& [* z% Q" n  19.过于笼统 We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统,不能提供多少信息。
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, t) i% Z$ F$ F  20.动词时态错误 Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 动词时态不正确 检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-15 00:15:44 | 显示全部楼层

托业作文常见错误23种

</p>  21.选词不恰当 I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在这种情况下不应该使用该词 可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。( q! N9 Q6 M1 v; k& |/ i* d$ v7 n- f
  22.单词形式不当 I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的单词的形式不正确 检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。) [) X, l4 H7 {/ {9 K
  23.用词错误 Even I don‘t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。
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