很多参加gre的考生在做gre写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯,这是非常不好的。提纲在gre写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对gre issue进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让gre issue得高分。下面针对gre issue写作提纲思路与分析进行说明。
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" z! t7 R1 f: ? 【题目】At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.【总频率23】
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6 w- d0 ]9 V; d0 Y' Z8 U: y& {4 e- O! a 在过去不同的地质时期,许多的物种因为自然作用而非人类行为而灭绝。因此,人类社会为了挽救濒危物种而付出的巨大努力,尤其是以大量的资金和工作机会为代价,这样做是毫无道理的。人类和自然当务之急(资金、工作)和长远考虑(物种)不是人类造成的并不代表人类不必保护物种过去不是人类的作用,现在不然。* L. |3 X) W6 T! K! `( ~" ?
【提纲】主要是反对
) e* g I7 E! f4 G; _- [ 1 诚然,一些species 的确是自然死亡的: ]. X* v* e" c, \
2 However human beings are a part of the ecological system, if the equilibrium of ecological system is destroyed, it also could have effect on people’s life.+ D7 M" c; D- K( ^% Y0 x+ u% r
(1)从植被方面来说,如果一个地方的植被遭破坏,那么就会影响到当地动物的生活,因为有些动物是靠吃植物为生的;而且植物大多以绿色为主,绿色是生命的象征,如果没有了绿色,就缺乏朝气;
C4 U5 m5 W6 s% O, `5 c4 J" O+ c (2)To save endangered species is beneficial to the continual development of human beings and welfare for the future generations.4 a- J/ G N2 X1 B# ]
3 As far as I know, destruction of species has something to do with human actions to a large extent.【例子非洲很多人屠杀大象,甚至在街上卖大象的肉】既然人类做出了破坏物种的事,理所应当补救。, ~ Y1 S3 h, b$ ] c% N& ]! F9 ^
4 虽然是要take actions to save endangered species ,但是一定也要有个度,governmental finance is limited,therefore the most efficient way is to balance between making efforts and guaranteeing other works in effective operation.
' Q' _7 _, c; }; I 通过这种提纲式的弄清gre写作思路,即使考试的时候写了提纲,也还有充足的时间给考生答题。 |